Bhavani Ooo Bhavani
Nivu kane Kandu ‘Siva’ lo villan Bhavani
‘Avunanna Kadanna’ Ni kavita Addbutham
America lo Nee kavitalu ‘Vesavi’ lo ‘Kobbari bondam’
Aaapoddu nelo ni Kavita ‘Jwala’aagni ni
Vaddinchu marintha ‘Aavakaya Biryani’
కవిత బాగుంది. అయితే ఇన్పర్మేషన్ ఎక్కువ అవడం వలన కవితలో ఫోకసు పోయిందనిపించింది. ఇంకొంచెం crisp గా foucs చేఇస్ వ్రాసినట్లయిన అద్భుతంగా వుండేదనేది నాభావన.
Chala bagundi Bhavani garu. Chinna nati vishayalu anni baga gurthu chesaru. Ithara desallo unde telugu vallu miss ayye vishayalu ivi… Thanks for sharing.
Bhavani, ee telugu cinema kavitha adhirindi. keep up the spirit of your kavi in you.
Wish you would continue to write lots and lots of such kavithalu…
Regards,
Yedukondalu.
Bhavani…. Chala bagundi nee kavitha, nee blog kuda.
Chaala baagundi
Good one bhavani garu. As usual you helped us recollect the sweet memories of childhood one more time.
Mee kavithala tho maa paatha gnapakaalu gurthuku thesthunnaru.
Manchi kavithalu andhisthunnanduku Thanks.
Bhavani,
Awesome….!!!!!!!!!!
Good Luck to your next Poem.
Bhavani Ooo Bhavani
Nivu kane Kandu ‘Siva’ lo villan Bhavani
‘Avunanna Kadanna’ Ni kavita Addbutham
America lo Nee kavitalu ‘Vesavi’ lo ‘Kobbari bondam’
Aaapoddu nelo ni Kavita ‘Jwala’aagni ni
Vaddinchu marintha ‘Aavakaya Biryani’
Hello Bhavani,
Excellent….
Mee kavitha chala bagundi …
About fish curry, the pictures are too detail and spoon feeding even a dumb fellow can follow the instructions.
Hats off to your patience !!!
Thanks
mahesh
Chala bagundi Bhavani garu. Chinna nati vishayalu anni baga gurthu chesaru. Ithara desallo unde telugu vallu miss ayye vishayalu ivi… chaputhunnaru…………………..
krishna 9291510693
కవిత బాగుంది. అయితే ఇన్పర్మేషన్ ఎక్కువ అవడం వలన కవితలో ఫోకసు పోయిందనిపించింది. ఇంకొంచెం crisp గా foucs చేఇస్ వ్రాసినట్లయిన అద్భుతంగా వుండేదనేది నాభావన.
Bhavani,
Excellent….
Mee kavitha chala bagundi …
Manchi kavithalu andhisthunnanduku, Thanks
All the best for your future incomings.
Thanks.
Jakkala Venkateswarulu
Hi Bhavani
Good one mate. Really touched.
Keep it up. Good to see many comments.
Cheers
VAMSY
Excellent Bhavani.
please don’t kill my Telugu,,,so many spell errors in your poem, first correct all those